Princess Story

Princess Wren’s Backward Ball

At a moonlit castle ball, Princess Wren hopes to lead a dance she invented, with her cousin Finn as her first partner. But an enchanted mirror keeps making the ballroom floor send their steps in the wrong direction.

Cover of the children’s story “Princess Wren’s Backward Ball”

“Step to the left!” called Princess Wren, and the ballroom slid her to the right.

Her cousin Finn bumped into a velvet curtain. “I meant to do that,” he said, untangling one sleeve.

Moonlight filled the castle ballroom. At one end stood a tall silver mirror, and beneath Wren and Finn’s shoes lay a floor made of shiny blue tiles. The floor was enchanted: whenever the mirror caught a dancer’s face, the tiles copied that dancer’s steps backward, as if the dancer inside the mirror were doing the opposite.

Wren had invented a dance of her own. It began with a heel tap, a knee wiggle, and a little hop. She wanted to lead it at the castle’s moonlit ball, and Finn had offered to be her first partner.

“Ready?” Wren asked.

Finn nodded. They faced the mirror. Wren tapped her heel and wiggled her knee. The floor wiggled first. Finn’s feet slid one way, Wren’s slid the other, and both of them landed sitting on a cushion.

“Excellent sitting,” said Finn. “Was that part of the dance?”

“It is now.” Wren jumped up and tried again. “Heel, wiggle, hop!”

The tiles copied the steps backward. Wren hopped where she meant to wiggle. Finn wiggled where he meant to hop. They bumped shoulders, spun in a slow circle, and finished facing the broom closet.

A pair of sleepy castle mice peeked out from beneath the door.

“Clap, clap, scoot!” Wren called, trying a new step. Finn clapped, but the tiles made his feet scoot the wrong way. He slid past Wren like a little boat and stopped beside a vase of paper flowers.

“Clap, clap, scoot!” they chanted, and clapped again. This time Finn held on to the curtain, while Wren’s shoes slid backward without her. The curtain swayed. The paper flowers nodded.

Wren laughed, though her new dance still wasn’t working. She looked at the mirror, then at the tiles. Each backward step seemed to begin near the silver glass.

“Maybe we need a different idea,” she said.

Finn brushed a bit of curtain fringe from his shoulder. “I’m ready. And I’m very good at clapping.”

Wren smiled. The music played on, waiting for her next try.

Clap, clap, scoot— “Backwards feet, don’t you toot!”

Wren watched the floor while Finn clapped a quiet beat. She stepped toward the mirror, still facing it, then turned sideways. The tiles copied her step backward. She stepped behind Finn, still facing the mirror. Again, the tiles copied.

Then Wren walked to the far edge of the ballroom and faced the tall windows. Her back was to the mirror. She lifted one foot.

Nothing slid.

She lifted the other. The floor stayed still.

“Finn!” she called. “The floor only copies when the mirror can see our faces!”

Finn stood beside her with his back to the silver glass. “So it can’t copy our steps now?”

“Not when we face away,” Wren said. She peeked over her shoulder. “The mirror can see our backs, but not our faces.”

They tried a tiny heel tap, both facing the windows. The tiles did not move. Wren tried her knee wiggle. Finn wiggled his knees so hard his jacket buttons bounced, but the floor stayed quiet.

“Now the hop!” Wren cried.

Finn hopped. Wren hopped. Their feet landed together with a thump that made the mice pop out of the broom closet and clap their little paws.

Wren began her dance again, but the steps were tricky to remember without looking at her feet. She stumbled on the heel tap and nearly turned back toward the mirror.

“Wait,” said Finn. “We can follow a sound instead.” He clapped once, then twice.

Wren listened. “One clap for the heel tap. Two for the wiggle. Three for the hop!”

Finn tried it: clap, clap-clap, clap-clap-clap. Wren moved with the beats. Her heel tapped. Her knees wiggled. She hopped. Finn followed, and the mice joined in from the doorway.

The music seemed to find their rhythm. Wren lifted her hands, and the dancers followed her claps instead of watching the floor. She led them in a little circle, all facing away from the mirror.

“Clap once, tap your shoe! Clap twice, wiggle through! Three claps—hop with me!”

They landed together. No sliding, no bumps, no broom-closet turns.

Wren grinned at Finn. “My dance works!”

“And my clapping is excellent,” he said, giving one proud clap.

The mice answered with two tiny ones.

Wren led the dancers through the last part of her dance. They kept their backs to the mirror and their ears on Finn’s steady claps.

One clap: heel tap.

Two claps: knee wiggle.

Three claps: hop!

The castle mice hopped too. One mouse made a very small hop and landed on its own tail. It blinked, looked surprised, and tried again. This time it landed beside its friends.

Finn clapped the rhythm, slower now. Wren’s steps grew smaller. The dancers made one quiet circle, then another. Their shoes tapped the tiles like gentle rain on a windowsill.

At last, the music softened. Finn held up one finger for a final beat. Wren made one tiny step, and Finn made one tiny step beside her. The mice copied them without needing the floor at all.

“Best dance I’ve ever danced,” Finn whispered.

“Best dance I’ve ever invented,” Wren whispered back.

They bowed to the mice, who bowed with their noses close to the floor. Then Wren and Finn tiptoed out beneath the moonlit windows. Behind them, the silver mirror reflected an empty ballroom, and the enchanted tiles rested without a single backward step.

In the hallway, Finn gave one last quiet clap. Wren answered with a tiny heel tap. They walked together toward their rooms, keeping time with soft steps on the castle rugs.

At her door, Wren gave Finn a sleepy smile. “Tomorrow, I might invent a dance that goes forward.”

“Or one that stays in place,” Finn said. “That would be easy to keep up with.”

Wren giggled, then slipped inside. Finn padded down the hall, and the castle settled around them, peaceful beneath the moon.

Reading aloud

Clap once, twice, and three times along with Finn’s rhythm to help bring Wren’s dance to life.

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