Family Story

The Garden Walk Together

Lola plans to show her family the best parts of the garden, but everyone moves at a different pace. As her relatives spread out along the path, she begins to wonder how they can explore together without anyone having to hurry.

Cover of the children’s story “The Garden Walk Together”

“Wait for me!” called Gabe, as Lola’s first garden-walk group stretched from the porch to the flower bed.

Lola stopped beside a clay pot. Behind her, her little cousin Gabe hurried along with short, quick steps. Great-Grandpa Ben came slowly, tapping his cane along the brick path. Cousin Nia had already reached the flower bed and was peeking between the tall stems.

“Let’s all walk around the garden together,” Lola had announced after lunch. “I’ll show you the best parts.” She had pictured everyone side by side, like the happy family in the old photograph over the mantel.

The mint crowded the edge of the bricks, and soon the walkers were spread out along the path once more.

“Look at this big flower!” Nia called from ahead.

“Which flower?” asked Gabe. He was still near the clay pot.

Great-Grandpa Ben smiled. “I’m coming. This path has plenty of time for me.”

Lola waited for Gabe, then hurried to catch up with Nia. When she turned around, Great-Grandpa Ben was far behind. She ran back a few steps, and Nia wandered on without her.

At the flower bed, Nia pointed to a bright red bloom. Gabe arrived just as a bee buzzed away. Great-Grandpa Ben was still near the mint.

“Now you missed it,” Nia said, not unkindly. “The bee was wearing yellow stripes.”

“I wanted everyone to see it,” Lola said. Her cheerful walk was turning into lots of little walks. Every time she tried to bring one person along, someone else moved ahead or stayed behind.

They reached a wooden bench beneath a pear tree. Lola sat down, and the others gathered around—some quickly, some slowly.

“I’m sorry the walk keeps pulling us apart,” she said.

Great-Grandpa Ben brushed a crumb from his sleeve. “A garden doesn’t mind waiting.”

Lola looked at the path, then at all the different places where her family stood. The mint patch, the bench, the flower bed—each spot held something to notice. Maybe nobody had to race to the same place.

She stood up with a new idea. “Let’s try a different kind of walk.”

Lola pointed to the patch of mint. “Everyone, stay right where you are for a moment. Your first job is to find a leaf with a hole in it. You can look from your own spot.”

Gabe crouched beside the clay pot. Nia leaned toward the flower bed. Great-Grandpa Ben studied the leaves near the bench. Lola looked carefully at the mint, where a little green leaf curled at its edge.

“I found one!” Gabe called. He held up a leaf with a neat round hole.

“Bring it here, if you like,” Lola said. “Or show us from there.”

Gabe held it high. Everyone came a little closer, at their own speed. They made a small circle near the pot, and Gabe passed the leaf around. A tiny bite had made a window right through the green.

“Your turn to choose,” Lola told Nia.

Nia looked down at the path and pointed to the shade of a tall sunflower. “Find a shadow shaped like a hand!”

The family searched without leaving their places. Great-Grandpa Ben lifted his hand above the path. Its shadow stretched across the bricks, with five long fingers.

“That’s a hand shadow,” Gabe said. “It’s waving at us!”

Great-Grandpa Ben gave a little wave, and the shadow waved too. Everyone laughed, then gathered close enough to see it. Nia showed them how the fingers moved when she wiggled her own hand.

For the last discovery, Lola asked everyone to find a flower that was still closed. Nia spotted one tucked under a broad leaf. Gabe found a small bud beside the path. Great-Grandpa Ben noticed a closed yellow flower near the bench.

“Let’s show each one,” Lola said.

They took turns pointing. Nobody rushed ahead. Nobody had to hurry to catch up. Each person’s discovery brought the others to that spot, and the group kept gathering together, then looking around from wherever they stood.

At the last flower, Great-Grandpa Ben leaned close without touching the petals. “It’s keeping its own little secret for now.”

Lola smiled. The walk was still short, but the garden had grown bigger with every careful look. “We’re all finding it together,” she said.

Then they turned toward the porch, taking the path at a pace that fit them all.

On the way back, Lola walked beside Great-Grandpa Ben. Gabe skipped a few bricks ahead, then stopped to wait. Nia followed at a steady pace, pointing out the mint patch as they passed.

No one called, “Hurry up!” No one had to run back to find the others. When Gabe paused to inspect a small pebble, Great-Grandpa Ben caught up. When Nia stopped beside the flower bed, everyone joined her for a moment.

At the porch steps, the family gathered in a loose, happy bunch. Aunts and uncles had set out cups of lemonade and a plate of soft biscuits. The garden walk had taken only a little while, but everyone had something to tell.

Gabe held up his leaf again. “A beetle could peek through this hole and watch the garden.”

Nia wiggled her fingers over the porch boards. “My hand shadow was the biggest.”

Great-Grandpa Ben rested his cane beside his chair. “I liked the flower that hasn’t opened yet. It can take its time.”

Lola chose a seat between Gabe and Great-Grandpa Ben. “I liked that we all got to see each other’s finds.”

A few cousins asked to see the leaf, and Gabe passed it carefully from hand to hand. Nia made her shadow stretch across the boards. Great-Grandpa Ben described the closed yellow bloom in his slow, thoughtful way, and everyone listened.

The garden path lay quiet beyond the porch. Leaves nodded in the evening breeze, and the flowers held their shapes in the growing dusk. Lola leaned against her great-grandfather’s arm while the family talked in low, cozy voices.

Soon, cups were carried inside and the cousins gathered their sweaters. Lola looked back once at the path. The clay pot, the bench, the mint, and the flower bed seemed like friendly places now, each with its own small surprise.

“Next time,” Gabe whispered, “I want to find a leaf with two holes.”

“Next time,” Lola whispered back, “we can look from wherever we are.”

Then she walked inside with her family, carrying the day’s little discoveries in her mind as the house settled around them for bedtime.

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