Witch Story

Tilly and the Breezy Broom Race

Tilly loves to fly, while her cousin Owen is still getting used to riding a broom. When a blustery hill sends them off course, they must find a way to stay together and finish the race side by side.

Cover of the children’s story “Tilly and the Breezy Broom Race”

Tilly’s broom gave a happy zoom as the race flag lifted—then the hill gave a mighty whoosh.

The sunny meadow jumped with color. Buttercups dotted the grass, and a ribbon of tiny flags marked the course. It looped around a round green hill and ended beside a patch of daisies. Tilly’s little cousin Owen sat on his broom next to her, gripping the handle with both hands.

“Ready to race together?” Tilly asked.

“Ready,” Owen said. “But not too fast, please.”

Tilly loved to fly. She could swoop over a fence, skim above a pond, and make a neat little loop in the air. Owen was newer to broom riding, so she had promised they would finish side by side.

The village racers lined up: a baker witch named Marnie, a tall wizard named Gus, and two sisters with matching yellow hats. The race judge raised a red flag.

“On your brooms!” she called. “Ready—fly!”

Tilly leaned forward. Her broom zipped along the meadow, and Owen followed close behind. They passed the first flag, then a wooden sign painted with a smiling rabbit.

“Look, Owen! We’re flying!” Tilly called.

“I can see that!” he laughed.

The course curved toward the hill. A gust rushed down its sunny side, swirling grass and lifting the racers’ hats. Tilly’s broom tipped left. Owen’s broom bobbed right.

“Stay near me!” Tilly called.

“I’m trying!” Owen shouted.

The wind spun around the hill again. Tilly shot ahead, while Owen slid back toward the course marker. She slowed and circled toward him, but another puff pushed them apart.

Tilly looked at the flags fluttering above the path. They pointed in three different directions. The hill seemed to be stirring the air like a spoon in a bowl.

“We’ll find our way,” she called, though she wasn’t sure how. Owen waved to show he was all right, and Tilly hovered beside the course marker. The other racers swept around the bend ahead. Tilly glanced at the hill, then down at the grass, which leaned flat against the ground.

“Wait,” she murmured. “The grass knows something.”

Tilly stayed beside Owen while the next gust rushed over the hill. The grass, which had been lying flat, suddenly bent toward the daisies. Then the air gave a great swirly shove. Tilly watched carefully as the blades slowly stood up again.

“It bends just before the wind comes!” she said.

Owen peered down. “You mean the grass gives us a warning?”

“I think so. Let’s test it.”

Tilly guided her broom lower, close above the meadow. Instead of climbing up the hill’s sunny side, she steered behind it, where the ground dipped. Owen followed. The hill blocked the strongest gusts there, and the air grew calm enough for their brooms to glide smoothly.

“We found a quiet pocket!” Tilly said.

Owen’s shoulders relaxed. “This is much easier.”

They moved slowly along the low path. Tilly led first, watching the grass. When it began to bend toward the hill, she called, “Your turn to lead, Owen!”

Owen took the front. He kept his broom low and chose a steady line between two clumps of clover. Tilly followed, checking the grass behind him. A new gust rustled the blades, and Owen guided them around a small dip before the wind reached them.

“Good spotting!” Tilly called.

“Good following!” Owen called back.

The low path curved around the back of the hill, then joined the racecourse on the far side. A swirling breeze tugged at Tilly’s hat, but she held her place beside Owen. They traded the lead once more, reading the grass together: bent blades meant slow down; upright blades meant the way was clear.

At last, the meadow opened ahead. The finish line stood beside the daisies, and the other racers were already there. Tilly could have sped forward, but Owen was right beside her.

“Together?” she asked.

“Together!” he said.

They leaned forward at the same time. Their brooms skimmed across the last stretch and passed the finish flag shoulder to shoulder. The racers clapped and cheered. Marnie waved her hat, and Gus gave a happy whistle.

Tilly laughed as her broom settled onto the grass. “We finished together!”

“And we found the best path,” Owen said.

Tilly looked back at the hill and the bending grass. “That was my favorite way to fly.”

The racers gathered by the daisies, where the finish flags fluttered lazily. Someone brought a basket of apple slices, and Marnie shared a small round of honey bread. Gus told the tale of how his hat had spun in the wind and landed neatly on his broom’s handle.

“It looked like a hat riding a broom,” Owen said.

Everyone laughed, including Gus.

Tilly and Owen sat in the flowers, with their brooms resting in the grass nearby. The daisies nodded above their heads. A bee buzzed past, inspected one blossom, and went on with its work.

“Were you worried when the wind pushed us apart?” Owen asked.

“A little,” Tilly said. “Mostly, I was thinking about how to stay with you.”

“I liked that you waited for me.”

“I liked that you spotted the clover path,” Tilly said. “And that you took the lead.”

Owen picked a daisy petal that had fallen beside his knee and set it on the ground. “Next time, I can lead around the whole hill.”

“Maybe,” Tilly said. “And I can follow your clues.”

The race judge came by and handed them each a blue ribbon for clever flying. Tilly tied Owen’s ribbon around his broom handle. Owen tied hers in a loose bow, which wobbled when she lifted the broom.

“Perfect,” she said. “It’s dancing.”

They stayed a while, listening to the village sounds grow quieter. The breeze traveled over the meadow in little waves, pressing the grass down and letting it rise again. Tilly watched the blades lean, just as they had before the gusts, and smiled at the way the whole field seemed to share a secret.

When it was time to go, Tilly and Owen mounted their brooms and flew home side by side, taking the easy path above the meadow. They didn’t race. They let the brooms hum gently beneath them and pointed out the rabbit sign, the clover patch, and the round hill they had circled together.

At home, Owen hung his ribbon by the door. Tilly set hers beside it, and the two blue bows rested close together. Outside, the evening breeze rippled over the grass. Tilly remembered their steady flight and was glad they had found a way to fly as a pair.

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