Snow Story

Naomi’s Snowy Trail

After fresh snow covers the garden, Naomi wants to mark a path from the porch to a bench for her visiting cousin, Lila. When her first footprints fade, she observes what happens to the snow and tries a slower, more careful approach.

Cover of the children’s story “Naomi’s Snowy Trail”

“I made a trail,” Naomi said. “But where did it go?”

Her cousin Lila sat beside her on the porch steps, wrapped in a quilt. Beyond them, the garden bench rested under a thin white blanket. A winding path led to it, marked by boot prints and little twigs at the bend.

“I can see where it goes now,” Lila said. “Tell me how you found it.”

Naomi smiled. “It started this morning.”

Overnight, snow had covered the small garden. It lay on the porch rail, the bench, and the winding path, smooth as a new blanket. Naomi pressed her nose to the window. Her cousin was coming to visit, and Naomi wanted to make a clear trail from the porch to the bench.

“She’ll know just where to walk,” Naomi told her dad as she pulled on her boots.

Outside, the air nipped her cheeks. Naomi stepped off the porch and marched toward the garden. Her boots went crunch, crunch, crunch. She looked back. A row of prints crossed the snow.

“Perfect!” she called.

Then she hurried toward the bench, eager to see how far she could go. Her boots skimmed over the fluffy snow with quick, light steps. She reached the bench, turned around, and stared at the trail.

The first prints were still there. Farther along, though, the snow seemed almost smooth. A little wind had swept loose flakes across the shallow marks. Naomi walked back, peering down.

“Maybe I went too fast,” she said.

She tried again, this time taking tiny, quick steps. The prints appeared for a moment, then loose snow slid into them. Naomi brushed one with her mitten. It vanished completely.

Her shoulders drooped. She wanted Lila to find the bench without guessing where the path curved. The garden looked wide and white, and her trail had nearly disappeared.

Naomi stood still and studied the deep print beside the porch. It had a clear edge. She put one boot into it, then lifted her foot carefully. The snow held its shape.

“Hmm,” she said. “That one stayed.”

She looked toward the bench and had an idea.

Naomi returned to the porch and studied the snow beside the first deep print. She set one boot down slowly and pressed until she felt the firm ground beneath the snow.

When she lifted her boot, a deep shape remained. Naomi bent close. The edges were neat, and the middle was dark with shadow.

“That’s it,” she said. “Slow and firm.”

She began again, placing each boot carefully in front of the last. She pressed down, waited, then lifted her foot straight up. Crunch. Another clear print appeared.

Naomi did not hurry, even when the bench seemed far away. She watched each step, making sure the next print followed the winding path. At first, she could hear the snow squeak beneath her boots. Then she heard only the quiet hush of flakes falling on her coat.

At the bend, Naomi paused. The path turned around a little garden bush, and the bench was hidden behind it. If Lila came along too quickly, she might walk past the turn.

Naomi looked around. A few thin twigs lay beside the bush, poking out of the snow. She picked them up and set them in a small arrow beside the path. The twigs pointed around the bend toward the bench.

“Now nobody will miss it,” she said.

She continued with slow, firm steps. The snow pressed into deep prints under her boots. When she reached the bench, Naomi turned to check the whole trail. It curved from the porch, past the bush, and right to the seat. The footprints were clear, and the twigs marked the turn.

A breeze crossed the garden. Loose flakes slid over the path, but the deep prints still showed beneath them. Naomi felt proud. She had not needed to stomp or race. She had just needed to take her time.

When Lila arrived, Naomi showed her the trail. Lila followed each print, then noticed the little twig arrow at the bend.

“I found it!” Lila called.

Naomi held out her hand, and together they walked the last few steps to the bench. They sat side by side, with their boots resting in the snow.

“And that was how I figured it out,” Naomi finished.

Beside her on the porch steps, Lila looked again at the path. Snow was still falling, but the prints remained easy to see. The twig arrow stood at the bend, its tips dusted white.

“You made the trail just for me,” Lila said.

“I wanted you to find the bench,” Naomi replied. “And I wanted to see if I could make the prints stay.”

“You did both.” Lila leaned her shoulder against Naomi’s. “I liked following them.”

They sat quietly for a little while. The garden was hushed under the snow. A flake landed on Naomi’s mitten, and another settled on Lila’s quilt. From the porch, they could see their boot prints leading to the bench, one deep step after another.

“I think slow steps are good for lots of things,” Lila said.

Naomi nodded. “They give you time to notice where you’re going.”

Inside, Dad had set out warm milk and cinnamon toast. The cousins left their boots by the door and ate at the kitchen table, telling Dad about the bend and the twig arrow. Lila made her own arrow with two fingers in a dusting of flour on the table. Naomi giggled and helped brush it away.

Later, they brushed their teeth and climbed into their beds in the little room where Lila was staying. The quilt lay across both their laps while Dad read a story aloud. Naomi could still picture the white garden and the careful prints running all the way to the bench.

When the story ended, Lila whispered, “Tomorrow, we can look at the trail again.”

“Maybe the snow will cover some of it,” Naomi whispered back. “But we’ll know where it was.”

Outside, fresh flakes settled over the winding path. Their boot prints rested beneath the falling snow, quiet beside the bench. Under the quilt, Naomi and Lila listened to the soft hush beyond the window, then closed their eyes.

Good to know

  • Loose snow can drift into shallow footprints and make them harder to see.
  • Pressing firmly into the snow can leave deeper footprints.
  • Naomi uses twigs to mark the bend in the garden path.

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