Sledding Story

The Sled That Went Whoop!

Jocelyn wants to sled from the top of a small hill all the way to its flat stopping area, but her sled keeps veering toward a snow mound. With Marcus beside her, she looks closely at the slope and considers what the tracks might reveal.

Cover of the children’s story “The Sled That Went Whoop!”

Jocelyn’s sled went “whoop!” and turned toward the snow mound again.

It bumped softly into the lumpy pile and stopped with its nose pointing straight up, as if it were trying to sniff the clouds.

“Oh, hello, mound,” said Marcus. “You’re getting a lot of sled visits today.”

Jocelyn laughed and climbed out. “I want to go all the way from the top to the flat part at the bottom. The whole hill!”

The hill was small, just right for sledding. A smooth route ran down its middle and ended in a wide, flat stopping area. Grown-ups stood nearby, chatting and watching. Jocelyn’s mom gave a friendly wave from beside a park bench.

Marcus held the back of the sled while Jocelyn climbed on. “Ready?” he asked.

“Ready!” Jocelyn scooted forward.

The sled slid down a little, bumped over a ridge, and veered toward the mound. Jocelyn planted her boots in the snow to stop.

“Whoop!” she said, copying the sled. “It’s like it has a favorite place.”

“Maybe it likes the view from the mound,” Marcus said.

Jocelyn pulled the sled back to the top. She tried again, this time pushing hard with both hands. The sled raced ahead for a few feet, wiggled left, and bumped into the same soft snow pile.

“Boing,” said Marcus.

“Not boing,” Jocelyn said, though she was grinning. She brushed snow off her mittens. “I’m pushing harder, but it still goes over there.”

A pair of grown-ups helped a younger child carry a sled up the far side of the hill. Everyone had room. Jocelyn looked down at the middle of her route. Sleds had passed there again and again, pressing the snow flat. The middle strip looked smoother than the bumpy edges.

She tugged the sled back to the top, but didn’t climb on yet. “I think I know what to try,” she said. “Let’s look at the track.”

Marcus leaned close. “The hill has clues?”

“Maybe,” Jocelyn said. She pointed to two shallow grooves running down the smooth strip. “I can line the sled up with those.”

Jocelyn turned the sled until its runners matched the shallow grooves. She sat down and placed her boots neatly inside the sides.

“Should I push?” Marcus asked.

“Just a little,” Jocelyn said. “And then I’ll let the track help.”

Marcus gave the sled a gentle nudge. It slid forward. The runners hummed over the packed snow, and Jocelyn’s hat bobbed with each tiny bump.

“Here comes the mound,” Marcus called.

Jocelyn watched the smooth middle strip. The grooves ran straight ahead, while the mound waited off to the side. The sled wiggled once, then followed the grooves.

“Stay with the track,” Jocelyn told it. “No sightseeing today!”

The sled slid down the hill. A little ridge made it hop. Jocelyn lifted her mittens like wings, and the sled landed with a quiet thump. The flat stopping area opened in front of her, wide and clear. Jocelyn dragged her boots through the snow. The sled slowed, slowed some more, and came to a stop well before the far edge.

“I made it!” she called.

Marcus hurried down the side of the hill, staying out of the sledding path. Jocelyn hopped off and looked back up. From the bottom, the grooves were easy to see: two shallow lines in the packed, smooth middle strip.

“Those sleds pressed the snow down,” she said. “That part got smoother than the sides.”

Her mom smiled from nearby. “You spotted a good route.”

Jocelyn looked at Marcus. “Want to try it?”

“Definitely. But if my sled visits the mound, I’m saying hello.”

They carried the sled back up together. This time Marcus sat in front, and Jocelyn held the back until he was lined up with the grooves. She gave the sled a small push, then stepped aside.

Marcus slid along the packed track, his scarf ends bouncing against his coat. The sled made one tiny hop and stayed in the middle. At the flat area, he planted his boots and slowed to a stop.

“Your turn!” he called.

Jocelyn grinned. “Now we know the hill’s secret.”

They took turns, lining each sled up with the shallow grooves. Each ride followed the smooth strip toward the safe, flat stopping area, while the soft mound stayed beside the route, ready for a friendly bump another day.

After several rides, Jocelyn and Marcus sat on the bench beside the hill. Their sled rested between them, its runners dusted with snow. Nearby, the grown-ups were still watching, and the younger child was practicing a slow slide on the far side.

“Do you think the grooves will stay there?” Marcus asked.

“Maybe for a while,” Jocelyn said. “More sleds might press them a little flatter.”

She could see the middle strip clearly from the bench. It was smooth where many sleds had passed, with the two shallow lines leading down to the wide, flat stopping area. The snow mound beside it had a few soft dents and a shallow sled-shaped mark.

Marcus pointed at the mound. “It looks like it’s been getting plenty of visitors.”

Jocelyn smiled. “Tomorrow, it can visit somebody else’s sled.”

A light breeze moved through the bare branches overhead. A few flakes slipped from a branch and landed on Marcus’s sleeve. He brushed them away with one mitten, then showed Jocelyn the tiny wet spot they left.

“Snow confetti,” he said.

Jocelyn brushed snow from her own coat. “The hill gave us a good ride.”

Their grown-ups called that it was time to head home. No one hurried. Jocelyn and Marcus carried the sled together, taking care not to drag it across the smooth track. At the edge of the hill, they turned for one last look. The route was quiet now, and the flat stopping place waited at the bottom for the next sledders.

Jocelyn brushed snow from one mitten, then the other. Marcus did the same, patting his palms together until the loose flakes fell away.

“Next time,” Marcus said, “I’ll remember the grooves.”

“And I’ll remember not to push the sled like I’m racing a train,” Jocelyn said.

They walked with their grown-ups along the park path. Their boots made soft crunches in the snow, and the sled bumped gently between them. Jocelyn could still picture the funny little hop, the mound waiting to one side, and the smooth track carrying her all the way down.

At home, she hung her coat where it could dry and set her mittens beside it. The hill would be there another day, with its packed middle strip and its bumpy edges. For now, Jocelyn was glad to be warm, tired, and safely home after a ride that went exactly where she had meant it to go.

Good to know

  • Repeated sled rides press snow down, making the traveled strip smoother than the bumpy edges.
  • A sled’s runners can follow shallow grooves in packed snow.
  • Dragging boots through snow can help slow a sled.

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